Hello bloggers,
Today I am going to share with you my thunder storming writing here is my writing hope you like it!
The storm caught up to me as I was running for my life. The lighting was so loud that my ears thought they were in heaven and I was scared for my life. CRASH the lightning went. As I stepped in the puddle I could barely hear the little splashes. POW The thunder goes it's getting furious And then as soon as i get home the thunder gives a very bad goodbye CRASH BOOM POW.
the end.
Comment some feedback if I did something wrong thank you for reading this!
Kia ora Teva,
ReplyDeleteGreat to see you have shared your writing on your blog. Can you explain what you were trying to achieve in your writing? That way people will be able to give you specific feedback.
A good tip is to read your writing out loud to check if it makes sense. This will also help you spot some punctuation errors. Remember you also have tools on your chromebook that can help you with this.
Awesome writing Teva.
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