OMG Teva it was really fun to go through the slides,The sentences that you had put in were rather " exotic " but I still loved it. Next time try to ad more sentences
My name is Rhia and I really liked this blog post! I think it was really creative and entertaining that you made this because it was a lot of fun to do! I also liked how you made it a little creepy because I LOVE creepy stories/articles. This post gave me a really cool memory of when I was playing this game called Until Dawn and had to make decisions to stay alive or die:) Something you could maybe improve on is making sure it makes sense and proofreading before you PUBLISH!
good one but you need to fix up your sentences.
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DeleteOMG Teva it was really fun to go through the slides,The sentences that you had put in were rather " exotic " but I still loved it. Next time try to ad more sentences
ReplyDeleteKia Orana there Teva,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Rhia and I really liked this blog post! I think it was really creative and entertaining that you made this because it was a lot of fun to do! I also liked how you made it a little creepy because I LOVE creepy stories/articles.
This post gave me a really cool memory of when I was playing this game called Until Dawn and had to make decisions to stay alive or die:) Something you could maybe improve on is making sure it makes sense and proofreading before you PUBLISH!
Kind Regards
Rhia (I'm in your class)
WHY!!!
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