keep alive innocent children

Today i am sharing  a piece of writing that i have been crafting. I am really proud of this piece of writing

i was trying to use onomatopoeia


here is my writing:
 Yesterday there was a massive storm like I mean massive and it was definitely not fun. Because there were a lot of strikes in the city. I was at my school that time in the library. We were just reading books but then a lightning stroke kaboom!!! Everyone dashed out the door  boom!!! It struck again “ wow” everyone said.

I was still doing my job which is librarian duty and I just finish issuing my books

My heart was pounding like as I was in the hospital until we had to go back to the classroom.  Then a lighting strike came dashing down and it was the biggest one I have ever seen in the history of me  but then it hit the sky tower and nothing happen.

But that stroke got the whole class at attention and the lights went in a flash.

Later I was playing snakes and ladders but then the lights turn of someone said “hasti!” then we all shouted her name. And the teacher came back, but we did nothing and the storm was over.

I think I have achieved using describing words.

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